Man, there's alot of areas. Hey, no-one's perfect, but I'd have to say copic colouring is the one that annoys me the most. Just the paper you use, I'm sure. You really need to start doing some paper testing. It's really sad to see some good lineart ruined with pre-school looking ink marks.

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its not dramatic enough!!!!!!!

think of the DRAMA!!!!!!

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But seriously. Yeah, your colouring could use improvement. Maybe do heaps of practise with copics (I'll buy you some for you for practise with your B'Day if ya want) and use other means of colouring in the meantime.

I also notice that otherwise great pictures have not been top-notch because you get a bit lazy on the detail and don't put much effort into certain parts. Remember, as an artist you have to invest heaps of time into all areas of your work, even if it means spending hours on one aspect. It won't do to draw one thing magnificently and then think 'Ah, bugger it, it'll be fine like this,' and do a random scribble that brings down the overall quality.

Though this can be a bit detrimental time-wise. .__. I once spent about 3-4 hours trying to correct a hand, once. And made three copies of one other-wise good picture because one of the eyes didn't turn out how I wanted it to. And then there was completely re-drawing Sil and Lol Issue 2 again because I couldn't get Sil's expression right in the last frame. And... I'll stop there. o_O;;;
Euuuuurgh. That's an extreme, don't turn into me if you can help it. 8D;;

Work as hard as you can on facial expressions as well, because they are generally the main focus in a picture. It takes a lot of painstaking work to get emotion properly conveyed; a slight tweak of the eyebrow or angle of the lip could make a big difference in the expression overall, so it's hard. Not that I can talk. But yeah.

Your toning and inking is beautiful, so I don't think you need to focus specifically on that at this point.

Your anatomy needs improvement when it comes to certain perspectives and positions, but that's a general flaw in most artists.

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I said digital colouring only because there isn't many in your gallery... i can't draw at all so i lack the critiquing skills all artists seem to have of eachother.... LOL .... i either like it or i don't... and your gallery is full of stuff i like ^_^

Everyone says either colouring or digital colouring! XP

't looks like a signal from above, it does!

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I love your work We all know your a great drawer. But i'd love to see some of your images black and white, but detailed. not just outlines or sketches, but shading, texture etc. I just think it would look really nice on some or your pieces.

Ooooo and i'd love to see you do some fan art of things i know Which is mostly mainstream crap anyway

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Needs more... finished/cleaned up stuff. some pics i can't understands 'cause of this, but in general your anatomy and everything else i think is damned good - also 'cause i currently don't have the guts to stray from the safety of pacer, eraser, ball point and colour pencils XP

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Eh....I'd have to say something in the general style...although I really have no clue on that o.o

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*looks at nibs and pens, and they tell her to "not be afraid" and that they "love her" she cries and runs away* Yes, I'm afraid of stuffing up my inking. D: But I'll do my best. >=0 What pieces do you think? Can I have some linkies? =0 Pweeese?

I'm thinking of doing some Kingdom Hearts Two fanart... because some of those heartless are just SO DANGED CUTE! Sarah has the strategy guide, so I'll steal that for a while and see what I can come up with.

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My copic colouring annoys me too, I look at it, and feel like I'm about to cry. Then I wonder how the hell you get yours looking so good on the same paper.

I've gotta say that I much prefer the sketch markers, because they have a softer tip. And that paper I got from Jacksons is perfect. ;_;

Although I do tend to use about 50 million strong colours too many 8D;;

Thankyou! I'll try my best and do more Copic tests. >=3

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